Does this writing interest you? It's short?

you are very good with detail and i could envision it really good. However, I know as strange as this may sound, it was too detailed. When the writing is too detailed, it can sometimes lose the readers interest. This happens to me all the time. I will be trying to hard to describe a scene in my writing and I get bored from it, and I want to stop writing my story and start all over again. (Hint: I mean all of the time.)